week 3 framing and composition

framing and composition 

this photo was taken for the bernd and hilla becher inspired picture this was meant to be straight on but is at a bit of an angel 

this photo was for the exercise where we had to find pattern the lines seem to be at different lengths  this photo where in real life they are straight  

theses two were also for pattern

 

                                                                                                                                                                                  

i wanted to add some edited pic to this post theses are from week 4 dt1 

original  

                                    

 first try  at week 4 digital tec 

 second  try for week 4 deigital  tec 

i had real trouble with this exercise at first but have gone back and done more practise and feel that i got it down pat now .in the frist image i tried to add some more colour but messed it up i dont know how i got all those strange colour blots on the second one i got the black and white done easy but had trouble keeping just tatiana in cloure and keeped going over the lines i know now i needed to zoom in and use a smaller brush 

for this photo i thought it would look better in black and white but i feel that iv lost a lot of detail in the black and white  




these are some of the self directed photos i took for this exercise i like the ones of my sister but I'm not happy with the rest they to blurry and out of fouces that's what i get for not taking my ti pod having a sour wrist and running around in the rain lol